"Synchronicity"
She is poetry in motion
a walking symphony
a graceful naiad
an elegant meander
in a sparkling river
She is
curvaceous elegance
a gentle whisper
a delicate accent
a magical whirl
in a delightful breeze
She is synchronicity
a mysterious deja vu
a cosmic sruti
a transcendental wiggle
(that leaves you begging!)
She is
mesmerising presence
her sorcery
a natural emanation
Amazing that
exquisite beauty
walks this earth.
© Vikram Madan.
UPDATE Feb 2012:
Found a subject who fits my poem perfectly...
9 comments:
the image fits the poem beautifully!
Hi MD, thanks! :-)
When I saw the girl, the subject of my poem, my mind produced visuals of a beautiful, graceful river. This was about 10 years back.
And when I searched google a few days back for an image to go along with the poem, I knew immediately that this image was it!
:-)
Vikram
A very artistic conception of imagery...Good work Vikram!
Hi Priya, thanks!
I do want to clarify that this poem is on a girl, not a river.
The poem is 10 years old. Based on a girl I knew at the time.
I don't think a river could inspire me to write this way! LOL.
:-)
Nice love poem...u were in love..
Hi Ramesh,
No, I was not in love with the girl who I have described in this poem. I knew her, that's about it.
So this is not a love poem, though yes, love poems can be written in the manner in which I have written this poem.
If you see beauty somewhere, it does not mean you have to fall in love with it.
(And if you dont fall in love with every beautiful girl you see, it doesnt mean you're a brutal criminal without feelings, or homosexual!)
You can look upon this poem as a photograph or a painting. Of an exceedingly beautiful, graceful girl. I am the photographer. Art appreciator. The girl is the art. ;-)
Great site just discovered it. Will look much further .. thanks so much Vikram.
Malcolm Wilkes ( Cornwall England )
One of the best love poems I've seen. Great blog!
Hi JC, thanks, but its not a love poem. I knew the subject of the poem vaguely, that's about it.
But yes, love poems can be written in the same vein.
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Hi Malcolm Wilkes, thank you for your compliments. Most welcome to browse and leave comments. :-)
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